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The author says that reactive people are like a can of soda. You can shake them and they will suddenly pop. Proactive people are like water, you can shake them and shake them but they will never explode. Reactive people are people who respond after something happens. Proactive people are people who respond before something happens.
The author says that there is a difference between a leader and a manager. A leader says," what things do I want to accomplish? Whereas a manager says," how can I accomplish certain things best?" A leader climbs up to the top of the tallest tree and says," were in the wrong jungle!" But a manager says," were making progress."
I started the second habit today and the second habit is - begin with the end in mind. The author says that means begin your day with the image of the end of you life as you picture of reference.
The first habit was about being proactive which means responding before something happens.
Issues Summary
"A leader says," what things do I want to accomplish? Whereas a manager says," how can I accomplish certain things best?"
→ Suggestion: A leader says, "what things do I want to accomplish?" Whereas a manager says, "how can I accomplish certain things best?"
There should be a space after the quotation marks and before the opening quote. Additionally, the question marks should be inside the quotation marks.
"A leader climbs up to the top of the tallest tree and says," were in the wrong jungle!"
→ Suggestion: A leader climbs up to the top of the tallest tree and says, "we're in the wrong jungle!"
There should be a space after the quotation marks and before the opening quote. Also, 'were' should be corrected to 'we're' to indicate the contraction for 'we are.'
"But a manager says," were making progress."
→ Suggestion: But a manager says, "we're making progress."
Again, there should be a space after the quotation marks and before the opening quote. 'Were' should be corrected to 'we're' for the same reason as above.
"the end of you life as you picture of reference."
→ Suggestion: the end of your life as your picture of reference.
'You' should be corrected to 'your' to properly indicate possession.
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